Just one complaint. I think the design of the head character the "gym coach" is a bit odd. I do not like the way his eyebrows are also shaped like crowns. Although this is great for theming and it even helps me know that this guy is *the boss* I find it disturbing on a personal level. Other then that my comments will have to wait until I see a full episode, or at least a full sketch from your program to give you further opinion. However here are some things that really stand out and make this the best thing I have seen on newgrounds today.
-Character design -The characters arehuge and exaggerated, they move smoothly, and are wonderfully drawn.
-Environment- It was a very mature choice to have the background faded while we were focused on the characters. The gym looked like a gym.
-I think you need to give the characters some stakes what are their motivations. (A preview should give me a sense of what I am going to see in the future.)
I still enjoyed it 5 stars!
Is this ever cool. I enjoyed it and let it loop for some time.
Thanks! The 10/10 made me happy :)
Hey I just played this game, and I must say it was worth playing and an enjoyable experience. You even have a great sense of humor throughout.
I was really really addicted then my people found religion, now they won't stop celebrating, and offing themselves. I knew I shoulda banned that book.
You stuck a virtual gun to my head and told me in the chat room to 10/10 it :D
So here I am. Just kidding I srsly think they should go and shove this into the chat section. of Newgrounds it is that good and well designed. :D
A fine use of reversing organs, and then this spooky melody hit me in the face I was enchanted excellent work all the best!
That's the effect I was going for^^
Thanks for the review.
I liked it
Happy blipz and bloopz and an elephant an excellent robots ate my elephant type experience. Is it odd that I can relate to this track?
I don't think it is. If you can it means I managed to do what wanted :)
It sounds very child like, kind of like something you would see in some new age indie childrens show like yo gabba gabba or something. I would call it, nelly the grumpy octagonal lizard from planet L. If you wanna talk script i'm all yours.
I feel like I could relate to the ponies. Like they were people like you and me.
This would be an interesting band.
Fan art is sometimes really fun. The Archies meet Newgrounds Lore I enjoyed this piece.
OMG Funny! I decided to check more of this series out and this one is the best good work! I am now a big fan!
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