Just one complaint. I think the design of the head character the "gym coach" is a bit odd. I do not like the way his eyebrows are also shaped like crowns. Although this is great for theming and it even helps me know that this guy is *the boss* I find it disturbing on a personal level. Other then that my comments will have to wait until I see a full episode, or at least a full sketch from your program to give you further opinion. However here are some things that really stand out and make this the best thing I have seen on newgrounds today.
-Character design -The characters arehuge and exaggerated, they move smoothly, and are wonderfully drawn.
-Environment- It was a very mature choice to have the background faded while we were focused on the characters. The gym looked like a gym.
-I think you need to give the characters some stakes what are their motivations. (A preview should give me a sense of what I am going to see in the future.)
I still enjoyed it 5 stars!
Is this ever cool. I enjoyed it and let it loop for some time.
Thanks! The 10/10 made me happy :)
Best Flash ever I have no idea where these retards are coming from.
Good but needs expansion
Interesting, good quality animation but the story line was kind of rushed towards the end, why didn't you throw in like a grey council of evil elders who would tell Orange to go fuck himself, the world must be grey!
Finally that song of mine seems good for something :D
Thx for using it.
It was so awesome I had a seizure.
Omg this made my day! Excellent work. The facial and expressive nature of this released the inner humor to hilarious levels.
Pop one of my tracks in there for good measure :D
Jk hey great animation good luck in your collab.
I have not collab ... I wanted to enter but not
I have been waiting for this.
YAY so glad you posted this up!
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